can't smile without you (a little bit change version)

*do a little change of last time work(few day before) make some arangement
is it feel better? or?
come on, give me some comments....
your comments is fully appreciated........thanks

对之前的作品，作了些小调整。。。怎样？会好点吗？
给些意见吧，你的意见，无任欢迎。。。细心聆听。。